Flash Fiction: Rainy Day

Posted by Rachel on November 11, 2015 in nature, weather, writer's sketch |

Everything looks different now.

The sun has found a hiding place between pewter clouds and the birds forget how to sing. I can barely see through the sheet of mist coming over the hill, it’s shroud darkening the world as far as the eye can see. I am not prepared for this. I am not yet strong enough to survive such torrents, but I must. Surrounded by thousands of kin, but more alone than ever reminds me of how small I am, how I am but one blade of grass.

If I could reach into the sky and pull out the sun, I would, but I’m restrained by my earthly tether. Never reaching farther than my outstretched arms. Never protected from the world’s worst. I wish at least the birds would sing, carry a tune through the solemn weather to remind me of brighter days. But they have all gone. I don’t blame them–I envy their freedom, their ability to leave at will. That is a luxury I was not afforded, and instead I must stay and welcome the rains. Standing in the vast field,  the unrelenting wave approaches. Gaining ground, coming closer.

Bracing for the worst, I cling to myself, holding tight to where my roots have planted me. Winds thrash me against my neighbors, but no one seems to notice we’re in this together. Each one of us is alone, an army of individuals. So we sway about, letting the wind beat us down as the first droplets fall from the sky. They are not soft and gentle, but like hundreds of stones crushing you one-by-one. I take the pain in stride, nimbly twisting my way around whatever I can but the rain still hits me. Over and over until I fall limp upon the ground.

The kind thing would be to let up, for the rain to move on and shower it’s vengeance upon someone else, but it remains. The torture intensifies and suddenly I am choking. Drowning. Each second passes like an eternity, the weight of the rain holding me down, clouding my once bright view of the world. In the brief moments of relief, I cannot stand. I am bruised and torn, unable to regain the strength I felt in spring. So instead I stay low, waiting out the storm, knowing one day the sun will return and the birds will sing again.


Fall TV Round Up 2015

Posted by Rachel on October 23, 2015 in current event, review |

It’s that time of year again! I’ve watched several new shows over the last few weeks and my verdict is in! This year there was an influx of drama shows, so this list reflects that more than sitcoms this time around. Without further adieu–

Blindspot– The premise of this is really exciting, somewhat Memento(ish) in style given the main character has forgotten her memory and is covered in mysterious tattoos. It’s a little melodramatic, but I think the deep mystery is enough to keep it on the air.

Minority Report– Based on the book/movie by the same name, it follows one of the PreCogs after they’ve been liberated from their watery prison. Similar to the original story, solving murders before they happen is integral to the plot, but it lacks that same excitement factor. I think it’s fate is uncertain.

Heroes Reborn- Reboot of the original that tanked several years back, this show tries to fix the muddy plot of the former version. So far, so good! The new characters mingling with the old is a great mix and the plot feels worthy of these reluctant superheroes. Fingers crossed!

Limitless- Another “remake / reboot” of sorts (who’s surprised?) follows a nobody who takes NZT and develops the use his entire brain capacity. I like this version because it uses the lead from last year’s rom com flop, Manhattan Love Story, as well as the voice over style. Brian is a charismatic main character and the thriller undercurrent keeps me interested.

Life in Pieces- Although this has a Modern Family vibe to it, the narrative style is far different. Broken into 4 small stories that don’t necessarily relate to each other, I believe this comedy has found a new, fun delivery style that could make it a winner. I’m not sure it’ll last for that reason, though, but I said the same of MF back in the day.

Quantico- Seriously, I love this show. FBI academy recruits in a Grey’s Anatomy type work/romance drama with a who-dun-it plot. It actually gives off a Shonda Rhimes vibe with all the intense twists and turns and flashbacks and flash-forwards. You can bet I’ll be sticking with this one!

Supergirl- Why hasn’t this show been made sooner? It’s a thing of pure beauty from the cast to the dialogue to the feminism and the all around awesomeness of the stories. Can we just talk about when that boy looked at Supergirl in awe like kids have done to so many male superheroes and how you cried? Yeah, that’s every episode. New television kryptonite right here! Must watch!

What shows have you tuned into this season? What’re your thoughts?


Writing What You Don’t Know

Posted by Rachel on October 5, 2015 in current event, musings, writing |

Lately there’s been a lot of chatter about what people can/should write…or not. I’ve expressed my feelings before about writing what you love, and loving what you write so this subject seemed like something I should blog about.

TL;DR: My opinion is pretty simple: write what you want to write. Put in the time, effort, and hard work it takes to make “what you don’t know” as real as possible.

The old phrase says, “write what you know” and I think that is something all writers embrace. We write characters with similarities to ourselves or people we know. We write about places we’ve been or that have bits and pieces of those places thrown in. We also write about experiences, dreams, or struggles we’ve endured. That’s all very true, but we also write about characters and places and experiences that we never could possibly know–like worlds with magic, or building a colony on mars, or a high school under attack by zombies. So when people claim they (or others) can’t or shouldn’t write what they don’t know, I call shenanigans.

Speaking from personal experience as an alternate history writer, I have to imagine history taking a completely different turn than it did and what that might look like. No one ever lived it, but my job as a writer is to (hopefully) make you believe it could have happened. This takes a LOT of research and sometimes people disagree with my assessment. Sometimes they disagree with things from my own experiences I wove in. Frankly, whether it’s a new city, zombies or a change of history, we have the tough job of making those things real–making them believable. This requires research. Sometimes a heaping ton of research. So much research you want to give up on the idea all together. But when it’s a story we know we must tell, we push forward and do what’s necessary to give it a voice.

Okay, so with that said, what about writing about demographics that you don’t fit into? Other religions, other genders, other sexualities, other races, other mental or physical health than your own? I say, go for it. Be prepared to work hard at this story, though. Maybe harder than you’ve ever worked before.

Important// Your desire to write something outside your experience shouldn’t be about riding a trend. These experiences belong to real people. Real people are not trends. Zombies are a trend, mental health is not. If you want to write about X because you think it will get you published, then you’re writing it for the wrong reasons. If you want to write about X because that character or story is something you feel you must tell, then take the chance. //Important

You might be thinking, “Won’t I be stepping on the toes of people who lived those experiences?” If done to the best of your ability, I don’t believe so. Ultimately, though, people writing about their own experiences and own communities will naturally be more authentic. And they should be. They should stand as something to emulate, not copy. But this shouldn’t stop you from writing something you don’t know. It is your duty as the writer to put in the time to ensure these characters, places, or experiences are true to life. Yes, you can certainly still “write what you know”. I believe that is true of any story and you’ll intentionally or unintentionally bring in bits of your life or personality to the book, but there are plenty of things you will not know. There will be plenty of things you never even thought about that play into the lives of other people.

Part of researching what you don’t know should involve asking the people who do. This can absolutely seem terrifying and daunting, because what if you offend them? And you might. But you’ll be glad you got their opinion because it will provide invaluable insight. After all, you won’t find everything you need on the internet or in books. Another important tactic to writing what you don’t know is to read novels about the people you’re writing. Even better if you read the books by AND about the people you’re writing. Learn as much as you can.

Important // Even when you talk to people who have lived the experience you’re writing about, please remember they are just one story and don’t represent the whole of that demographic. There is no single story for Black people, for LGBT people, or any one else. There is no “normal”. Everyone’s story is unique. If you ask for like-minded betas to read, remember it’s true there as well. But also listen. Truly listen to the thoughts and opinions of these people and do your best to honor their experiences. If that means total rewrites, so be it. You’ll be glad you did. //Important

It’s not about being brave, it’s about doing your job and not half-assing it.

So let’s be real, even once your story is out in the world, some people will hate it. People will also love it. Even if it’s an experience you personally lived, people will 100% find something wrong with it — something stereotypical and unbelievable about it. It’s not going to be perfect in everyone’s eyes no matter what you’re writing about. At the end of the day, though, you should be proud of the work you put in and the way you wrote your story, whether it was something you knew or something new.


What I Wish I Knew

Posted by Rachel on September 18, 2015 in audience, characters, discovery, musings, writing, writing tips |

I was brainstorming what to blog and thought putting together some writing resources might be helpful. Since I’m certain that’s been done before, the idea quickly morphed into more of a “what I wish I knew” when I was writing my first query-able novel. Hindsight is always 20/20, but maybe this post can help people learn what took me (and others) a lot longer to figure out. This post is definitely targeted towards writers seeking traditional publication, but I’m sure most points can be applied to all writers.

To start, here are some resources I’ve found helpful that I wish I had from day one.

Word Count

How About We CP

Manuscript Wish List



Okay, this list details some of the things I wish I knew (as well as what some of what my CPs, betas, and writing friends wish they knew- shout out to all you lovely peeps for contributing!):

Don’t write for the trends. The trends you see published are probably a year or two passed in the publishing world by the time you write them.

Even if you’re pantsing the draft, definitely have an outline. Your structure and form will fall apart without a map to follow so at the very least pin-point major events– this video series is a great resource.

Create a world building bible even if you’re writing contemporary. Keeping track of all the details in your world can be daunting, but having a solid list, dictionary, guidebook to look back on is invaluable.

Read the genre you’re writing in before writing. There might be common themes or cliches you encounter that you can then consciously subvert or work out of your own story.

Reading your genre will also help uncover comp titles to use in pitch contests or your query letter.

There is no one way to write or one way to edit. Forget what you were taught in school or intensives about “the right way” and do what feels natural to you.

Don’t compare yourself to other writers or their journey to your own. Everyone has a different path–we’re in this together, not competing against each other.

If you and your CP/beta aren’t getting along, don’t continue the partnership. There are so many writers out there looking for readers, someone else is bound to be a better match. Maybe even your best friend.

Don’t be afraid of conferences or workshops. While it might be expensive and scary, the networking is priceless and you’ll probably learn a whole lot (about writing, about other writers, about the industry), too.

Try contests, they can be very helpful, but remember most writers are discovered from the slush pile.

THE BOOK might not be this book. Keeping learning, keep writing and eventually you will get there.

Embrace the writing community. Make friends, join groups, go to meet ups– do whatever it is you can to be involved and help yourself grow.

Don’t send a query right after you’ve written it. Revise, edit, and have that sucker critiqued by as many eyes as you can get on it.

When a CP or beta gives you feedback, listen to them. Even if you disagree, hear them out. You are too close to your writing to always see the problems and the things you might disagree with now could be the best edits you make later.

Agents are people, too. They might seem like the rock stars of publishing, but they’re just like you and me. Don’t be afraid of them or idolize them– show respect and be kind like you would with anyone else.

Take a break from writing. Once you’ve finished your draft, walk away. Work on a new project or take a break all together. It’s better to edit with fresh eyes.

If there’s something you wish you knew, I bet others would agree. Share your thoughts below!

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