About Rachel

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  • Biography: "I want adventure in the great wide somewhere, I want it more than I can tell. And for once it might be grand, to have someone understand, I want so much more than what they've got planned."

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The Interruption

Posted by Rachel on May 23, 2016 in action, characters, writer's sketch, writing |

“Did you hear it?”

I burst through the door, looking for anyone who might be around to speculate with.

“Wait–you did, too?” my sister said, twisting to glance over the couch.

“What the hell was it?”

“It came on about five minutes ago, right? That’s when you heard it?”

“Yeah, I was in traffic and then the radio just cut out. I figured that old piece of shit grandma gave us had just seen it’s day but then the radio made this crackling noise. Was it on the radio here, too?”

“No, it came through the television.” Jumping onto the couch, I quickly eyed the TV before my sister said, “It hasn’t come back since.”

“Was there a video with it?”

“No. It was weird. Right in the middle of my movie the sound died but then…”

“Hold on. Where are mom and dad? Did they hear it?”

“My phone’s been blowing up. Everyone heard it. Even Uncle Lanny in Alaska! He texted asking if anything weird had happened in the last few minutes. I haven’t heard from mom or dad, though.”

The trembling in my core amplified. “Did you try to call?”

“No.”

“Call them!”

As my sister frantically dialed our parents, I surveyed the neighbors congregating across the street. They shouted at each other and pantomimed their excitement or concern. In a flash, I was back on my feet and out the door. “Did you hear it?” I called across the street.

“They think it went country wide,” our neighbor responded.

“Maybe the whole world,” said another.

“What did it mean?” I asked but they returned to chatting among themselves just as my parents’ Jeep pulled into the driveway.

“Did you hear it?” my sister asked from behind me.

Mom’s brow cranked upward. “Did we hear what?”

My sister and I couldn’t help but share a perplexed look. “Anything on the radio?”

“You heard it, too?” mom said.

“That thing we heard on the phone?” dad added.

They didn’t seem to notice the chatter going on across the street and casually walked to our door like the world wasn’t in a panic around them. “Everyone heard it,” my sister said.

“It came through on your phone?”

Dad nodded.

“I heard it in the car and she heard it on the TV,” I said.

“Strange,” he said to himself. “Let’s go inside.”

I held my ground and said, “What did it mean?”

A wrinkle appeared between mom’s eyes and she let a tense breath escape. “Nothing good.”

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NESCBWI Top 5

Every writing conference I attend teaches me some nugget of knowledge I hadn’t realized or put into words before. Often there is more than one light-bulb moment. The latest writer-palooza was no different and I hope some of the findings I learned will prove helpful to you all as well! 1- Openings need to change […]

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Character Flaws

Posted by Rachel on April 19, 2016 in characters, discovery, musings, reading, writing |

Teenagers, like adults, are complex. They make mistakes. They say problematic things. They make stupid choices. This isn’t a news-flash for anyone. After all, teens [people] are flawed, nuanced, and constantly growing. In my opinion, they do and say A LOT of things very, very wrong and this should be reflected in YA novels. And […]

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Story Easter Eggs

Posted by Rachel on March 29, 2016 in characters, discovery, planning, plot, reading, symbolism, writing |

Something unique and special I love about books is finding the hidden hints authors weave in about the their muses, favorite people, or personally important things. Incorporating “Easter eggs” into your novel can create additional creative layers in your storytelling. Sometimes those allusions are really only for you and your inner circle, but for those […]

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