{"id":225,"date":"2012-04-24T09:46:50","date_gmt":"2012-04-24T14:46:50","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.rachelhorwitz.com\/blog\/?p=225"},"modified":"2012-05-08T09:38:11","modified_gmt":"2012-05-08T14:38:11","slug":"place-the-scene","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.rachelhorwitz.com\/blog\/2012\/04\/24\/place-the-scene\/","title":{"rendered":"Setting the Scene"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Lately I\u2019ve been focusing on character development since your protagonists and antagonists are the heart of the story. That\u2019s still true, but setting is just as important. I\u2019ve said it before\u2014 the description you write for different scenes sets the tone and mood for how the reader will perceive the event. In this section of description, I would suggest to take a page from the screenwriter\u2019s script and focus on simplicity.<\/p>\n<p>As you start a new scene, ask yourself, does this take place inside or outside? During the day or night?<\/p>\n<p><strong><a href=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/www.rachelhorwitz.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/04\/026.jpg\"><img data-recalc-dims=\"1\" decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" class=\"alignleft  wp-image-254\" title=\"026\" src=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/www.rachelhorwitz.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/04\/026.jpg?resize=150%2C150\" alt=\"\" width=\"150\" height=\"150\" srcset=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/www.rachelhorwitz.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/04\/026.jpg?resize=150%2C150&amp;ssl=1 150w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/www.rachelhorwitz.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/04\/026.jpg?zoom=2&amp;resize=150%2C150 300w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/www.rachelhorwitz.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/04\/026.jpg?zoom=3&amp;resize=150%2C150 450w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 150px) 100vw, 150px\" \/><\/a>For Internal-<\/strong> Note what is important about the space: Is there furniture or other people present? Does the room belong to someone or is it obscure? An internal location can reveal secrets about its inhabitants by the d\u00e9cor. Remember that the <em>atmosphere<\/em> of the internal space is equally important. Is it tense or calm? Does the location offer sanctuary or create further danger?<\/p>\n<p><strong>For External-<\/strong> As the scene takes place outdoors, be thoughtful of its position and classify what type of space it occurs in. Urban or rural? Crowded or vacant? Outside could even be on the balcony of an apartment, or as remote as the deep woods. Moreover, the <em>weather<\/em> conditions are integral to the feel of the situation at hand and should be considered. Read more on weather <a href=\"http:\/\/www.rachelhorwitz.com\/blog\/2011\/10\/29\/writing-tips-weather\/\" target=\"_blank\">here<\/a>.<\/p>\n<p><strong>For Temporal-<\/strong> Regardless of where the scene takes place, the time of day<a href=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/www.rachelhorwitz.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/04\/Castle.jpg\"><img data-recalc-dims=\"1\" decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" class=\"alignright size-thumbnail wp-image-255\" title=\"Castle\" src=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/www.rachelhorwitz.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/04\/Castle.jpg?resize=150%2C150\" alt=\"\" width=\"150\" height=\"150\" srcset=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/www.rachelhorwitz.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/04\/Castle.jpg?resize=150%2C150&amp;ssl=1 150w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/www.rachelhorwitz.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/04\/Castle.jpg?zoom=2&amp;resize=150%2C150 300w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/www.rachelhorwitz.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/04\/Castle.jpg?zoom=3&amp;resize=150%2C150 450w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 150px) 100vw, 150px\" \/><\/a> is necessary to explain as well. If the scene shines at night, the mood of the scene could drastically be altered if you choose to place it during the day. The times available are not as stark as morning or night either: there are other hours in-between that can create a whole new frame of mind.<\/p>\n<p>It\u2019s that simple. Sure, you can describe the places for pages or just for a paragraph, but setting comes down to these three simple points. Internal. External. Temporal. Starting off by answering questions about the location will give the scene a place to begin and for you to create detail and complexity that then provides further information for the reader.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Lately I\u2019ve been focusing on character development since your protagonists and antagonists are the heart of the story. That\u2019s still true, but setting is just as important. 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