{"id":28,"date":"2011-08-15T16:51:00","date_gmt":"2011-08-15T16:51:00","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.rachelhorwitz.com\/blog\/2011\/08\/15\/writer%e2%80%99s-sketch-expression-map\/"},"modified":"2011-08-15T16:51:00","modified_gmt":"2011-08-15T16:51:00","slug":"writer%e2%80%99s-sketch-expression-map","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.rachelhorwitz.com\/blog\/2011\/08\/15\/writer%e2%80%99s-sketch-expression-map\/","title":{"rendered":"Writer\u2019s Sketch: Expression Map"},"content":{"rendered":"<div class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;\"><span style=\"font-family: Calibri;\">Another great tool in the writer\u2019s arsenal is creating unique, consistent characters. In order to keep these people behaving time and again in the same manner, you should first work on their basic emotions. For this exercise, focus on practicing varied expressions that will arise when writing. By all means, use a character you are currently studying from a published or original text (perhaps even your warm-up story if it\u2019s the same character), you don\u2019t need to create one for this matter. <\/span><\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;\"><\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;\"><span style=\"font-family: Calibri;\">When describing the person\u2019s changing reactions, be as descriptive as the expression requires. But you don\u2019t want to focus on their every wrinkle either. Remember: People don&#8217;t always (or only) smile when they are happy. Perhaps your character has a glum outlook and refuses to smile\u2014this must also be taken into account. Fill out the following for a quick warm-up exercise to your writing time period. <\/span><\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;\"><\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;\"><span style=\"font-family: Calibri;\">I\u2019ll use a character that most people are familiar with so you can notice the subtle changes: <strong>Mickey Mouse.<\/strong><\/span><\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;\"><\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;\"><span style=\"font-family: Calibri;\">Happy<em>: Thumbing his suspenders, Mickey snickered a bubbly laugh and graciously received Donald\u2019s birthday gift.<\/em><\/span><\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;\"><\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;\"><span style=\"font-family: Calibri;\">Sad<em>: With his ears downcast, the cement sidewalk held Mickey\u2019s attention, its monochromatic pattern reflecting the weight in his stomach.<\/em><\/span><\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;\"><span style=\"font-family: Calibri;\"><span style=\"mso-spacerun: yes;\">&nbsp; <\/span><\/span><\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;\"><span style=\"font-family: Calibri;\">Angry<em>: Mickey furrowed his brow and nose together, sternly scolding his pup after discovering Pluto\u2019s jowls covered in a ruby glaze from the missing cherry pie.<\/em> <\/span><\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;\"><\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;\"><span style=\"font-family: Calibri;\">Scared<em>: He gasped loudly and his hands shot upwards to cover his mouth before he lost his balance and stumbled backwards.<\/em> <\/span><\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;\"><\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;\"><span style=\"font-family: Calibri;\">Surprised<em>: Despite the flutter of his heart, Mickey beamed regretfully to erase the fright on his face before apologizing to the pedestrian he bumped into.<\/em> <\/span><\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;\"><\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;\"><span style=\"font-family: Calibri;\">Flirtatious<em>: Nudging his shoulder against Minnie\u2019s, Mickey\u2019s smirk curled playfully as he giggled.<\/em> <\/span><\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;\"><\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;\"><span style=\"font-family: Calibri;\">Reviewing the above expressions you can see how a minute alteration in description or diction can paint the emotion clearly and concisely. Throughout his sketch Mickey adheres to his personality which would provide an excellent base for any story starring the famous mouse to grow from. <\/span><\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;\"><\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;\"><span style=\"font-family: Calibri;\">Since this is a short exercise, feel free to add more emotions to your list and practice with increased frequency for a stronger gasp on your characters.&nbsp;<span style=\"mso-spacerun: yes;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><\/div>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Another great tool in the writer\u2019s arsenal is creating unique, consistent characters. In order to keep these people behaving time and again in the same manner, you should first work on their basic emotions. For this exercise, focus on practicing varied expressions that will arise when writing. 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