Query Roundtable Introduction
Welcome, traditional route writers!
We’ve all struggled through our query letter at least once. For many of us, it’s been a masochistic rehashing of the same 250 words over and over. And over. The worst part isn’t writing it, at least not for me. It’s reading your summary and thinking, “Is this the most succinct way to tell an agent how wonderful my story is?” Or, “Does this make any sense?” Or maybe, “Will an agent even like this?” That doubt is going to end here.
As much as we can work on our query letters (until we’re blue in the face) and hope for the best, what is really needed is a new set of eyes. Someone else to look over our pitch and ask the tough questions: Does this draw me in? Do I understand the conflict and stakes? Do I get a feeling for the main character? Those secondary opinions are what can help clear up any lingering problems potential agents might find when your query crosses their desk.
The point is to ensure that your letter stays out of the slush pile and sparks a fire in the agent’s mind enough that they choose to request more. Whether it’s a partial or a full sampling, your chances at hooking an agent begin (and sometimes end) with your query letter. I figured- what better way to help other queriers out than to have a query roundtable where anyone who wants open and honest feedback on their pitch can receive it?
Here’s the deal:
1- Let me know in a comment here or on twitter @rachelhwrites that tells me you want to submit your query letter and participate in the roundtable.
2- Take a last look at your letter and get it ready for the event on May 22nd. That’s less than a week from now (as to prepare for other contests but not interrupt them)!
3- Post your query on your blog (or renew your post from The Writer’s Voice Contest- if you participated) and give me the direct link to your post so I can compile the list here on my blog.
4- When the roundtable list goes live here on the 22nd, be sure to comment on as many other submissions as you can (preferably everyone so all of our unique perspectives can help each other refine our queries).
5- Use #QueryRoundtable on twitter for any discussions outside of the blogs related to queries where we can share experiences and best practices.
There’s not exactly an end date, or any sort of prizes, this is a way for us to assist each other down the traditional publishing path and encourage each other in our joint venture to get agented! If this sounds like something you want to participate in, let me know!






20 Comments
I think this is an awesome idea, and I am totally signed up for this.
I have a new version of my query from the one I did for The Writer’s Voice, so I’ll be sure to get that posted and give a link soon.
Great job organizing this! <3
You are brilliant. I actually have been reading through all the queries from the writers voice, and slowly figuring out why mine isn’t working. I’m in! I just posted a new query on my blog, but maybe I’ll spend some time on the new hashtag before I pick one for this roundtable. My query’s been through so many iterations I feel like it has multiple personality disorder.
Oh I can totally relate. I swear I’ve written 200 of them.
What a wonderful idea! I’d love to participate. I’ve been struggling with and agonizing over the query letter for my newest book for weeks now and getting more and more frustrated that I just can’t get it right. I think this is exactly what I need! Thank you!
I am totally in!! This sounds like so much fun!!
Awesome! I’m in 😉 I have my post scheduled for the 20th (just so it’s up in case any awesome agents happen to swing by) so I’ll tweet you my link when it goes up. Thanks for holding this, Rachel! It’s gonna be fun 🙂
I would love to participate! I hate query writing! AHHHHHH Someone help! =)
I love this idea Rachel but I’m going to be out of town all week with another job interview and a writing convention. My internet access will be sporadic so I don’t know that I would get to read and comment 🙁
Count me in, I love this idea!
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I’m an early bird, I reckon. I already posted my query up on my blog, and also threw in a link telling people to come over here and join in on the fun.
Here’s the link to my blog post with my query for the 22nd: http://rachelrussell.wordpress.com/2012/05/18/query-roundtable-elven-soul-ya-epic-fantasy/
Sounds good! I want to join in 🙂
Not sure how you want us to give your our blog link so I’m just posting it here!
http://shadows-of-destiny.blogspot.com/
Thanks for wanting to participate everyone! I hope everyone finds the feedback helpful! Make sure you tweet or comment your links here so I can put them into a single post!
I think this is a wonderful idea and I would love to participate!
Here is the link to my query post. Thanks so much for doing this!
http://i-am-so-grateful.blogspot.com/2012/05/query-roundtable.html
Here’s the link to my query post:
http://jomichaels.blogspot.com/2012/05/all-about-query-letters.html
Thank you for the opportunity, Rachel!!
Here’s the link for my query:
http://daninau21.blogspot.com/
Thank you so much for doing this! I am really excited about this!
Here’s my direct link: http://nicolezoltack.blogspot.com/2012/05/query-roundtable-crystals-magic.html
I’ve taken all your wonderful comments and revised accordingly. If anyone has time to take another look I’d appreciate it. Also I think I hit everyone else’s, but if I missed you, let me know!
http://strawberryhanky.blogspot.com/